You Have Left, And I Feel Emptier Than I Ever Have
I'm Abandoned Without Care
I Hear, That You Always Stick With Everyone
But I Don't Feel You There
You Are, The One That No One Ever Disappoints
But I Feel There Is A First
I Understand, That People Make Mistakes Just Like Me
But I Feel I Am The Worst
So What Happened, To The Promises That You Gave To Me
You Left Them In The Dust
And I Can't Believe, That You Would Turn Your Back On Me
You Seem To Have Cleared Me From Your Memory
I'll Admit, I'm Disappointed More With One Person
And That Would Be Myself
I Can't Take It, I've Screwed So Much Up In My Life
I Can't Blame Anyone Else
You Won't Forget, Everything That I've Told You
That I've Told You I Have Done
I Understand, If You Won't Accept Me Anymore
As One Of Your Sons
So What Happened, To The Promises That I Gave To You
I Left Them For My Lust
And I Can't Believe, That I Would Leave All My Faith Behind
I Seem To Have Cleared You From My Mind
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8 comments:
This is incredible Jess!
Thanks mom, I thought I should write some on this subject, especially since it's affecting me right now
This actually made my heart ache as I read it and I know you don't really know me but *hugs*. Amazing writing.....fantastically eloquent! It is really great that you write about things that are affecting you it's a good form of cathartic therapy I feel.
S♥
Thanks Sakura, it's nice that you're reading my blogs and thank you for the hug haha. Yea, I've been having problems with some faith issues and such so I really thought that I should write about it. Writing is honestly the biggest form of therapy you can have, at least to me, and singing of course haha.
Your writing is great Jess. It is a great way for you to express yourself. It is an outlet I never had as I went through my crisis of faith. Keep writing and I will keep reading!!
Great Job Jesse! I can't believe that poem; it's amazing! Good Luck with Fable 2.
This poem is just you writing feelings without really examining them or putting them into any kind of context. Creating the images is only the first step. I would say that drawing the meaning and experiencing that meaning is far more important. Pretty words only go so far, it's the meaning that carries feelings farther.
Pity some people can't hear the music in the feelings or catch the beauty in the simplicity of words. Great lyrics Jess!
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